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Dunford Novelists

Just got back from Dunford Novelists’ conference which is held in Bournemouth in January. This is definitely my most favourite conference in the world. It’s a working one for novelists. From beginner to best selling authors we’re all in the same boat.

How it works

You take along the first chapter of your novel and you get it critiqued on three levels. You get written critiques from other writers in the conference who opt to choose your chapter. Each writer chooses about six first chapters to critique over the course of the weekend.  You get in depth verbal critiques from the five other people in your group, you read the entire chapter to them.

Plus – and this is the really scary bit – you read only the first page of your novel to the entire assembly of novelists – the idea being that’s all they would read if they went into W H Smith and picked it up.  Then you keep very quiet while they tell you exactly what works and what doesn’t.

Trial by fire, but it’s fabulous. I want to go again right now. And it really inspires you to write the rest of the novel.

Incidentally I’ve done some research on the first page of novels, which I shall post here later. It’s fascinating stuff.

 

Update on my favourite mug!

Hah!

Have been in touch with the chairman of Swanwick, Xanthe Wells, well she is the secretary now, but she is just as lovely and she is going to send me another mug. So all will be well.  And I did manage to write a story yesterday, although I’m not convinced it isn’t rubbish!

I have a niggly feeling that it needs something extra – more work probably – oh why can’t they just come out fully formed and be perfect. I ignore these niggly feeling at my peril. Because I have come to realize that they roughly translate as, “Editor will send back”.

I wonder if there are any shelf stacking vacancies at Tesco. Am sure that would be easier than writing stories!

My favourite cup is no more

I Just broke my favourite mug.  It was a present for being on the committee of Swanwick Writers in 2010 (An excellent summer school for writers by the way, see link below). It was white with Swanwick 2010 written in blue on it and it was exactly the right size for coffee and I had to have it by me when I wrote – otherwise my stories would be rubbish.

And now it’s broken. And what if I can never write again?

Yes, I know, I am mad. I thought that was a qualification you needed to be a writer!

Mind you, thinking about it, I did used to have a lucky gold-coloured two inch pixie who stood on my desk and without whom I couldn’t write a word and I haven’t seen him for ages. And I still seem to have been writing. So maybe it won’t matter about the mug.

http://swanwickwritersschool.co.uk/

Writing Retreat – Day Five

Thursday 1st December

Hell, it’s my last day and I haven’t done anywhere near as much as I planned.  Get up at crack of dawn. Open laptop. Write and write and write.  Finish Chapter Three. Edit late chapters.   End with total word count of 7,000 words. But more importantly, feel that my novel has legs. Am beginning to fall in love with the characters and story.  Think I will carry on with this when I get home, which is one of the things I wanted to establish. One of the reasons I came away.

Things I learned

If you can possibly bear it, don’t have internet access. (wish I hadn’t succumbed)

Writing first pages (stream of consciousness writing) in the morning does work.  (will continue to do this)

Don’t take anything else to do. It’s just another excuse to get distracted. (wish I hadn’t taken competitions)

Don’t think you have loads of time. If you usually work to deadlines – as I do – then set some. Interesting how on the last morning I wrote loads.

Take chocolate. (you might think you won’t want any – but you will and it’ll save a lot of time going out to get it 😉 )

Would I do it again? Definitely!

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